Tuesday, 26th of May, 2009.

During today's class i didn't do much writing. I Spent almost the whole class editting. I started to edit even though i didn't quite finish my essay. I wrote part of my conclusion. I had to deduct 300 words from my essay. It was a very hard thing to do. I really had to concentrate so that i don't miss any mistake. I had to cut out some of my paragraphs. Also while i was editing i realized that my organization wasn't quite well. I need to shift some of the paragraphs around because in some parts of my essay it makes no sense. My transitions from one paragraph to another aren't that good. I really need to work hard on thursday's lesson since it is the last lesson. In that lesson i will finish writing my conclusion then i will shift some of the paragraphs and finally i will finalize everything. Hopefully i'll be ready to hand it in by thursday.